Saturday, May 19, 2012

Learning to Fly

This is the latest version of the first chapter of my latest book, Dream Flyer.  It will undoubtedly be edited and changed as I get further into writing and after my editor and proof-readers have their input.  I will be posting more later.   I hope you enjoy.



Her first memory was of floating in a sea of white.  When she awoke, she blinked groggily before looking around at an impenetrable mass of swirling mist.   The air chilled her skin but the cold didn’t seem to bother her, even though she wore only a thin cotton dress, pink with white flowers around the knee-length hem.   She was a young woman, her figure slim but showing the curves she would grow into.   Her hair, a soft brown color tumbled over her shoulders in wavy curls exaggerated by the moisture in the air.  She blinked slowly and looked around, her gray-blue eyes wide with fear.

As she bobbed slowly in the still air, she tried to remember how she got here, but there was nothing.   She didn’t know her name.  She had no recollection of her parents or if she had any siblings.  She couldn’t picture a house or any other place she might have lived.   She didn’t remember having any hobbies or friends.   She knew that a home and a family existed, but there was only empty space filling the place where those memories should be, just like the mists surrounding her.

Letting out a startled cry, she suddenly realized that she was hovering in mid-air.  There was nothing solid beneath her and when she looked down, she felt sudden lurching sensation and began to fall.  A frightened scream burst from her chest as she flailed her arms uselessly while plummeting through the clouds.  “NO!” she shouted, her voice cracking with fear.

Almost as quickly as it began, her fall stopped and she began to hover again.  Chest heaving, she looked around and trailed her long, thin fingers through the mist.  She tilted her head to look upward and thought to herself, “up”.  Immediately, she floated upwards.  With another thought, she banked left and right, weaving through the air as gracefully as a bird.  She rolled onto her back and stretched her arms over her head as she floated through the air.  It felt like swimming but without any sensation of pressure or weight. 

The feeling of flying made her stomach flutter with excitement but she couldn’t fight the dread that sat in her chest like a lead weight.  M The world around her was silent and formless.  She was alone and lost in her troubled thoughts: 

Who am I? 
What is this place? 
What happened to me? 
Where is everyone else? 
The questions kept forming in her mind but there were no answers until one word flowed through her min, a name.   With a quiet sigh, she said softly, “Dina.  My name is Dina.”   She looked down at the cotton dress she wore and she came to another realization.  “I like flowers and the color pink.”  Looking around again at the swirling mists surrounding her, she added, “And I can fly.”

For now, that was enough.

Sunday, May 13, 2012

Starting a New Book is Hard!

So as I said before, I've begun writing a new book and I can honestly say, getting this just right is really difficult.  I want to convey what the story is about without giving too much away too soon.  I've already rewritten the prologue and first chapter five times - usually after getting feedback from friends, but also because I'm trying to get it right.  There's been a lot of progress this week.  Characters are developing and events are occurring!  Introducing new characters and settings.  Quickly closing in on the 10K word mark.

As soon as I get final updated draft that I'm happy with, I'll post a preview here.  Take care all!!